Recently, I started a screenwriting
and movie-making group here in Las Vegas. Our objective
was to begin at, well, the beginning of the process and
work all the way through to an edited movie. Sounds easy?
Yes! Is it really? Not at all.
The one thing I ran into at the very beginning was the
problem of demonstrating the development of an idea into
something that could be used as screenplay material. The
big question is, "what's the difference between regular
material and screenplay material?" The only answer
I could come up with was, "a beginning, a middle, and
an end." They looked at me like I was kidding, but
actually, I'm not.
Put simply, a screenplay is a dramatic story told with
visuals and dialogue. The screenplay describes the actions,
the environment, the dialogue, and the situations that move
the story forward. Screenplays have a formula and a format
that has been in place for many decades. Yet, the beginning
screenwriter sometimes misses this point. I ran into one
fellow some months ago who was writing a screenplay that
was "325 pages" long! After further discussion,
he began to realize that, instead of writing a screenplay,
he had a novel with a story that meandered without end.
You can use any old idea for your story, but have a point.
Don't just write for the sake of writing as the story will
meander around into a traffic jam. If you have an idea,
define a theme or objective for the story. What's the point?
What is the main character's purpose in "life"?
Life? A character's life? Indeed, the character does have
a life in the world you create, but a screenplay is not
"real life". It's a metaphor of real life presented
in such a way as to represent a particular theme. To write
about a real life situation, you have to dissect the situation
and find the underlying theme. Then, using that theme as
a guideline, you must reassemble the original idea to best
represent the theme. Indeed, some aspects of the true-story
might be fictionalized to drive the story toward the point.
For example, my wife is working on a screenplay about medical
debauchery in Nevada. After a few passes, she began to realize
that the story roamed around in circles because of the many
facets of the topic. After much coaching, she began to realize
that she had to define one particular point and aim the
story at it. As a side-effect, the physical issues of the
story would be the driving force that leads the plot around
to reach "the point".
After writing and reading screenplays over the years, I've
given some pointers to folks that usually help them redefine
and direct their stories to a solid point. One of the main
problems, which I reiterate here, is that you have to "define
a point". For example, we might come up with an idea
that has a bunch of "cool" actions and situations.
We then try to write a story to include these ideas because
we want them to be in the story. But, this approach will
usually fail because --- what is the point? Define a point,
a theme, an objective that encompasses the feeling and direction
of these "cool" actions and situations and aim
your story in that direction.
To help to resolve the "meandering" problem and
the evolution of the story toward the point, create a story
where your main character is just this faceless being that
quickly and easily achieves his goal. No dialogue. No rhyme
or reason. They just reach their goal without effort or
conflict. This is boring, but it creates a basis for the
story.
Once you're satisfied with this straight-line story, add
a specific characteristic that makes this goal have meaning
to the main character. This would also mean that you would
have to modify the environment and characteristics of your
main character such that, to him, this goal means something.
Now, with a call to action, he chases his goal with fervor!
Now, add in an obstacle that keeps him from achieving this
goal. This would mean that somewhere in the main character's
history, this obstacle came into being, but is now an obvious
problem in his goal achievement. It could be a character
flaw, a villain, or any issue that blocks the main character
from his goal. How does he overcome this obstacle? Again,
a character modification and backstory is required to show
his ability to overcome this obstacle as well as some level
of action to do so.
Once the core story is solid and directed, you add a conflict,
a twist, and a resolution, one step at a time, until you
begin to see your character and story evolve. With a story
in hand, you can now add your dialogue to assist in the
forward movement of the story, but only as needed. With
this approach, you can slowly build your story while keeping
your "point" in mind and following the formula
for a solid screenplay.
It is essential that you keep an eye on the theme and objective
of the story and that you work in that direction, otherwise
your story will wander aimlessly. Keep it tight, start late,
leave early, and follow the three-act formula. In the end,
your screenplay will have the solid story and professional
appeal that producers are looking for in creating today's
interesting, original movies! |