The Internet is a relatively
new medium. What works for you in your printed offline brochures
and advertising materials may or may not work on your web
page. If you have already invested either time or money
or both in your website you should carefully scrutinize
the written words on your pages to see if they can really
deliver a return on your investment. Here are five important
questions to ask to when making a review of your website’s
copy.
1. Can a web visitor quickly grasp what
your page is all about?
You only have a short time to let your web visitors know
the purpose of your website. If it is not crystal clear,
they will have already surfed on to another website. Headlines
and sub headings that convey your most important pieces
of information are a must, especially for the main page
of your site.
Writing good headlines is a science in itself. Look at
a newspaper, almost every headline has a verb. Headlines
must be active, and they must be convincing. Marketeers
and linguists alike have identified what they call “power
words”, words that are emotive and draw attention
like “breakthrough”, “new” , “discover.”
Use these words to grip the attention of your web visitor.(An
excellent introduction to the science of headline writing
is Shelley Lowery’s article located at http://www.web-source.net/secret_formulas.htm)
2. Is your “Unique Selling Proposition”
highlighted?
There may be hundreds of websites offering the same thing
that you are offering. What sets you apart? What is the
distinguishing feature or benefit of your product that makes
your product or service different and, most importantly,
desireable? It may be one particular item, a combination
of items or it may be the sum total of all that you have
to offer. If you were a web hosting firm it might be “Worry
Free Service at a Price You Can Afford.” This particular
particular item is known as your Unique Selling Proposition
(USP). It is your biggest “cannon”, and you
have to “shoot it” right at the top of your
home page.
3. Have you clearly emphasized the benefits
that a consumer will get from your products or services?
It is important for you to first distinguish the features
and the benefits of your product or service. Using the example
of the web hosting firm, some features might be user-friendly
control panels, pre-installed cgi scripts, back up power
supply, etc. Benefits are not the same as features, benefits
deriving from these features would be: “Easy for you
to maintain” and “you don’t have to worry
about down-time.”
Remember, it is the benefits that sells your product or
service, not necessarily the features. You must convincingly
show that your product can answer the needs and desires
of the person who has just visited your web page.
4. Is the copy optimized so that your
pages will do well in search engine queries?
Optimization for search engines is something that traditional
advertising copy writers never had to deal with. No matter
how convincing your copy is, if no one can find your page
then it is useless. Be careful not to hide your keywords
with synonyms. If you want to be found for a particular
word or phrase, then make sure that this word or phrase
is in your headlines, in the body text and in clickable
text (“anchor text”) of links on your page.
For example, if you have the sentence: Click Here to Learn
more about our Web Hosting Services. The clickable or active
portion of the link should not be the words “click
here” but rather your keywords, “Web Hosting
Services”. If your copy doesn’t contain and
emphasize your keywords, your page will not fare well in
Internet queries, even if your meta tags include these words
and phrases.
5. Is there a call to action?
What is your “most wanted response”? What do
you want the surfer to do after she or he has seen your
pages? Maybe you would like her to order your product, download
an introductory ebook, to join your mailing list, to fill
out a form, or to call you up for an appointment? You can’t
expect her to do this, unless you ask her to do it and show
her how to do it. You may need a nice button that says “Order
Now”, or a sub headline that says “Download
your Free ebook.” The “call to action”
is very important and that’s why you should make it
prominent, and repeat it more than once.
So, take a look at your website, and make sure that your
copy is really doing the job of capturing the attention
of your web visitors, convincing them about the merits of
your offering, and showing them how to take the next step.
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