Want a little secret to
turn your advertising into an irresistible magnet for customers?
Dale Carnegie knew the secret, and that's one reason his
book "How to Win Friends and Influence People"
has sold more than 15 million copies. In fact, British Airways
recently named it, "The Business Book of the 20th Century."
It's a great book. But if Dale had titled it "How
to Remember People's Names and Curb Your Incessant Urge
to Argue," do you think it would have sold as well?
Probably not. There's great power in good titles.
What you may not realize is the words "How to Win
Friends and
Influence People" are not only the title of the book.
Those words were also the headline of a mail-order ad, which
sold the book.
The ad ran successfully for many years and sold hundreds
of thousands of copies.
So what does this have to do with turning your advertising
into
an irresistible customer magnet?
Here's what. Behind the title and headline is a "secret
code" that makes it powerful. Dale knew it. Great advertising
copywriters know it. And now, you're going to know it, too.
The "secret code" is actually a generic formula
that gets attention and creates desire in your prospect's
mind. Every winning headline has a unique generic formula
hidden inside. Here's the formula in Dale Carnegie's book
title and headline:
How to _____ and _____.
Let's see the formula at work. Say you are an executive
Recruiter, and you help companies find new executives. In
reality, your biggest problem is finding the executive candidates
in the first place. So, to increase your group of candidates,
you decide to run an ad in your local business
journal. Here's how you could use this formula to write
a headline for your ad:
How to Get a Better Job and Make More
Money
…and right away anyone who's even a little interested
would read your ad. Then, if your copy (text) is even halfway
decent, you'd get plenty of calls.
Or, let's say you run a martial arts school. Here's how
you could apply the formula in an advertising headline to
get you new students:
How to Stay Fit and Protect Yourself
Do you see how powerful that is? You've just zeroed-in
on people who are likely to be interested in learning martial
arts.
The brutal reality of advertising: An ad with a good headline,
and even mediocre copy, will get you a response and generate
sales. But with a poor headline, even the most brilliant
copy will get you little or no response. Why? Because without
a good headline to get their attention, most people won't
read any further.
The good news is, once you have identified a good headline
that works in one industry or market, you can adapt it (like
we did with the Dale Carnegie headline, above) for your
own business. Great headlines work as subject lines in emails,
titles on Web pages, and of course as headlines in print
ads and sales letters. Great headlines will literally transform
your sales.
How does this work in today's economy?
Recently a client asked me to help him introduce a new
service to Internet Service Providers. (Note: To understand
what you are about to read, you should know that ISPs call
their suppliers "backbone providers.") I wrote
a direct mail letter and my client sent it out to ISPs.
Because my client was revealing new information his prospects
hadn't heard before, we used the following "teaser
headline" on the front of the envelope:
What Your Backbone Provider Isn't Telling You Was this
an entirely original headline? No. I had seen a similar
"teaser headline" on a successful mailing to promote
an investment newsletter:
What Your Broker Isn't Telling You About High-Tech Stocks
So I merely identified the "secret code" in the
original winning headline, and applied it to my client's
market, ISPs.
The response to the mailing was overwhelming! Nearly 10%
of the
entire ISP industry responded to our letter -- and my client
has added eight figures of new annual revenues as a result
of the business that developed.
I'm telling you this not to brag, but to point out the
awesome power of good headlines. While many people spend
hours and hours trying to come up with "the perfect
headline" for their ads, there is an easier way. Find
proven headlines that already work for another business
in another industry, and adapt them to your business.
Then prepare for a flood of new customers!
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