I'll never forget what my accountant
said five years ago when he saw the ad I wrote for my services:
"How many scotches did you drink before you wrote this?"
He was kidding about the scotch. But he just couldn't believe
anyone in their right mind would write such a bold and outrageous
ad for their own writing, consulting and speaking services,
as I had.
Well, I spent $300 on that ad -- $200 to run it in a local
trade association directory, and $100 to have it reprinted
as a flyer. The following year, that $300 ad turned into
$12,341 in new business for me. And $12,341 was just a tiny
fraction of my total business that year.
Why did I make so much money myself while there were so
many thousands of "starving writers" in the world?
The answer may surprise you. You see, it's not because I'm
a better writer. It's not my schooling. Not my resume. Not
any talent I was born with.
It's all because I learned how to write "killer copy."
How do you write killer copy?
You start your killer copy with an emotion-packed opening
statement that will get the attention of your reader. This
opening statement may be:
* a headline
* an opening sentence
* a subject line on an email
* the header on a Web page
... or for that matter, the opening words in a telemarketing
script, radio commercial, or TV spot. What's important is
that you understand - your first words count for everything
- because you must captivate peoples' imagination with those
words in order to keep their attention.
Here are examples of opening statements
from actual successful marketing pieces:
a) "Take the luxury vacation of your dreams at a reduced
cost because of this special offer" (from a travel
agency's letter to business owners.)
b) "How to stop overwhelm before it stops you"
(from a personal coach's ad aimed at stressed-out overachievers)
c) "Why almost every financial statement in family
court may not disclose the full net worth of the opposing
spouse" (from an
investigator's sales letter to divorce lawyers.)
Then, after your emotion-packed opening statement, you
just
a) Make a promise
b) Back it up with convincing proof and
c) Ask for action
Let's look at how you do each of those
three techniques.
1. Make a promise. The letter
about luxury vacations starts with these words:
"Imagine taking your winter vacation knowing you aren't
spending a penny more than you have to - secure that you
have a team of travel experts making sure every little detail
of your vacation goes smoothly. "Here's how you can
have that vacation right now: Take advantage of an unusual
promotion our company is doing. Let me explain."
Pretty exciting, right? Even if you don't think so, the
people who got the letter did - because the letter produced
an amazing $5 million in sales for the travel agency.
2. Back it up with convincing proof.
The personal coach's ad for stressed-out overachievers,
the one that begins "How to stop overwhelm before it
stops you," contains this proof:
* 3 case studies,
* 3 testimonials,
* detailed credentials of the coach
* and a money-back guarantee.
Despite its stunningly bold claims, the ad comes across
as very believable and has generated a record-breaking parade
of new clients.
3. Ask for action. The investigator's
sales letter to divorce lawyers, beginning "Why almost
every financial statement in family court may not disclose
the full net worth of the opposing spouse," ends this
way:
"I would like to meet with you at no charge to show
you how I can be of service to you and your clients in future
family law cases.
"Please call me at your convenience so we can set
up a meeting to discuss further how I can assist your clients
recover their fair share of assets. Call me directly at
xxx - xxx-xxxx."
Killer copy always asks for action in the most powerful
way possible. Notice how the above words spell out exactly
what to do, and even make a big promise - that the lawyer
reading the letter will recover more money in court for
their clients (and, therefore, get more money themselves).
As you can see, a few words of killer copy can lead to
massive amounts of money. In fact, many people say writing
killer copy is the single most valuable money-making skill
in the world.
And recently, writing copy was named as one of the top
10 emerging professions for the new century.
It doesn't surprise me. In the age of the Internet, the
old style of advertising copy -- saying something clever,
and hoping people remember - just doesn't cut it anymore.
Besides, these days, with business-to-business advertising
growing so fast, the traditional advertising industry is
feeling a lot of pressure for ads that really produce results.
Why? Because, old-style advertising that entertains, but
does not sell, is not cost-effective enough for many companies
in today's hyper-competitive market.
Recently I heard from my former accountant. (A few years
ago, he left accounting to start a new business.)
He asked me if I wouldn't mind sharing some ideas on how
he could write killer copy for his own business.
I said sure. And now he's on his way to doing the same
thing that I do, for himself.
Funny thing about the conversation we had the other day.
Unlike the conversation we had back in 1995, he didn't kid
me about drinking scotch, or anything else. Maybe he finally
realized that when it comes to increasing your income, killer
copy is serious business.
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