Bruce Barton, cofounder of
the legendary BBDO ad agency, wrote letters that got staggering
results. He wrote a letter for Berea College that brought
in an amazing 100% response! (You can read the entire letter
in The Seven Lost Secrets Of Success.)
When you consider that the average successful letter gets
about a 0.02% response, Barton clearly leaped past anyone
else in his letter writing skills. But what was his secret?
After studying Barton's letters, books, private memos, speeches,
and advertising campaigns, I've discovered Barton's method.
I've used his technique to write my own letters and I've
been astonished at the results.
One letter got a 20% response. Another nailed a 10% response.
Still another is approaching a 97% response (ninety-seven
per cent!)! (It, too, is in The Seven Lost Secrets Of Success.)
I will now reveal the technique I've been using: Bruce
Barton's "Secret Formula."
Barton said that good advertising copy (and letters are
advertisements) had to be three things: (1) Brief. (2) Simple.
(3). Sincere. In an eye-opening essay he wrote back in 1925,
Barton said the following:
About Brevity:
"About sixty years ago two men spoke at Gettysburg;
one man spoke for two hours. I suppose there is not any
one who could quote a single word of that oration. The other
man spoke about three hundred words, and that address has
become a part of the school training of almost every child."
About Simplicity:
"I think it might be said, no advertisement is great
that has anything that can't be understood by a child of
intelligence. Certainly all the great things in life are
one-syllable things -- child, home, wife, fear, faith, love,
God." About Sincerity:
"I believe the public has a sixth sense for detecting
insincerity, and we run a tremendous risk if we try to make
other people believe in something we don't believe in. Somehow
our sin will find us out." Let's look at these three
steps a little more closely.
Brevity. A short letter isn't
necessarily what Barton meant. I've read many of his letters
and memos. Most of them were so brief they were blunt. But
those were not sales letters. When Barton wanted to persuade
you to donate money to a good cause or buy something he
was selling, his letters were longer, sometimes several
pages long. (Again, see that sample letter in The Seven
Lost Secrets Of Success.) Barton knew you had to give people
a complete explanation before they would buy.
Simplicity. Barton's letters
were always simple and easy to read. He strove for clarity
of communication. No big words, long sentences, or convoluted
passages. He was clear and direct and conversational.
Sincerity. Barton was always
sincere. He once dropped a million dollar advertising account
because he didn't support the client. That sincerity came
through in everything he wrote. Readers could pick up on
it.
Finally, Barton's letters were "... phrased in terms
of the other man's interest." Barton said your letters
had to go straight to the reader's selfish interest. He
said the favorite song of every reader is "I Love Me."
As Barton said in 1924, "The reader is interested first
of all in himself... Tie your appeal up to his own interests."
The next time you have to write a sales letter, consider
Barton's formula. It helped him write letters that are still
talked about today, and it helps me write letters that are
making my clients rich. Now use it and see what the formula
will do for YOU!
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