| Ahhh! The never-ending battle.
I'm sure you've heard both statements made with passion.
Those that believe you must walk your customer through each
and every benefit preach, "Long copy sells better!"
Proponents of this copywriting method say customers need
to be "lead" or "teased" into reading
the next paragraph and the next. Finally, when you have
them drooling, you reveal the punch line.
On the other hand, advocates of short copy state that consumers
today have extremely short attention spans. Copy that's
"to-the-point" is a necessity in order to make
a sale at all. According to these experts, the long, drawn-out
copy gets tossed right out the window by busy, impatient
readers. Feed it to them fast or you'll lose them to the
competition. So exactly who's right? They both are!
No, I'm not being politically correct and I'm not avoiding
the issue. The honest truth is that all people in the world
do not communicate in the same way. Due to this fact, no
one copywriting approach will work with every single product
or service. As with every other aspect of advertising, you
must look to your target audience for the answer.
I've used this analogy for years... when you begin to write
a letter you do not sit down and write then decide who you
will mail the letter to. Before you put pen to paper you
know who the recipient of the message will be. You know
their communication style and how to best phrase the information
so it will be well received. The same applies to copywriting.
Let's say, just as an example, that your target audience
consists of small business owners. These business owners
happen to all be Certified Public Accountants. Just from
this tiny bit of information I can tell you the target group
is extremely busy, is very detail oriented and has a bottom
line mentality. These people are generally analytical thinkers.
Based on these facts, I would not write copy to this target
audience in long form. Why? It would most likely not be
read.
The group above communicates in short, precise bursts.
They are looking for the bottom line first and an explanation
afterwards. The most effective way to get the attention
of this group (in writing) is to keep it short, sweet and
to the point. Otherwise you will lose them in what they
consider to be a "bunch of fluff." These folks
are definitely members of the short copy group.
So who belongs to the long copy group? People making an
investment for one. I don't mean an investment in the stock
market (so to speak). I'm talking about people who are going
to make a large investment of time or money in anything.
People who are thinking of joining an affiliate program
or multilevel marketing program would be receptive to long
form copy. Those who are going to invest many hours in a
self-help process would appreciate long copy. Let me explain.
When people are going to invest time or money (or both)
in something they get nervous. Customers need to be reassured
that they are making the right decision. They need to be
reminded of why they need to purchase this product or service.
A wealth of information makes these prospective clients
more secure about their decision.
Yes, there are other target groups that would benefit from
both long form and short form copy. There are a multitude
of them to say the least. As the advertiser, your job is
to discover which type of communication style will be received
well by your prospects. (A company named Myers-Briggs offers
an excellent course on defining communication styles. I've
participated in their training and found it to be highly
beneficial.)
So what about the writers who swear their copywriting approach
will cause major increases in response rates? What about
the writers who say their method works for any product or
service?
"But this guy said his copywriting style caused a
50% increase in the direct mail response rate of a jewelry
store." I've heard this at least a hundred times. Maybe
it did. However, I've never been a real fan of statistics
when used to prove a point such as this.
There are two items in the above statement that cause me
concern. The first is the percentage. We don't know how
many direct mail pieces were originally mailed. Perhaps
on the first campaign 50 envelopes were sent. Direct mail
normally provides a 1-3% response rate. If we allow the
3% in our example, that would mean the original campaign
received 1.5 responses. A 50% increase means the mailing
using the new copywriting style received 2.25 responses.
Technically, that is a 50% increase even if only two people
responded.
The second alarm that goes off is the phrase "response
rate." Most advertisers don't understand this statement.
Response rate does not equal sales. Response rate equals
responses. Literally, if a person calls to ask a question
in relation to the mailing it is considered a response -
even if that person never purchases. I caution you to beware
of those with "one-size-fits-all" copy- writing
approaches.
Yes, there are big names out there that will tell you that
one particular style of copy works to sell each and every
product and service. Again, technically, I suppose they
are right. However, it does not sell to each and every target
audience member. If you don't get through to the target
audience, the copy - regardless of whose style it is - is
a waste of time and effort.
Most buying decisions are emotional. Your ad copy should
be, too! Karon is President & CEO of Marketing Words,
Inc. who offers targeted copywriting, search engine copywriting,
and ezine article writing. Subscribe to Karon's free ezine
at http://www.marketingwords.com/ezine.html or visit her
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to write you own powerful copy at http://www.copywritingcourse.com.
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